Nice work :)
Much better balance with the audio and I would certainly take up that shield of faith :D
Keep up the great work.

I enjoyed that. You had some good points and they were well made :-) But what about the irritating customers that sit and chat after they've finished eating, but the restaurant is full and other customers are waiting to sit. Aarrgh! :-)

I think you've got the message about the audio :-) Good responses to other peoples comments too. You're clearly listening and wanting to improve. That's cool :-) Bonus star for that.

Software? Get Krita (www.krita.org). That will massively increase your potential.

Really good perspectives, angles and animation. Great piece of work.

Like most of the other reviewers have said, this is a good and interesting concept, there just needs to be a bit more to do. If you've got more of the story to tell, I'd be interested in seeing it.
Nice work so far.

Nice job. The mouse could be a bit more responsive.

Yes, I agree with FranckM, this piece has a great style to it. There's a lot going on in there :-)

That's wonderful. The distortion on the shelves is really interesting and makes you keep looking for more. Good work.